Friday, October 14, 2005

one of my firsts...

GONE

I let him go that day
I let him go today

Why?
Cause he chose not to stay

What?
I’m still trying to figure it out

When?
Again…this noon

I let him go that day
Again…today

6 comments:

Rim said...

short n sweet..(n hey, u dont check email???)

archies world said...

hey rim...

well i do. but i did not receive any mail from u...

Rim said...

Hey..
just sent an email again to the id u gave...maybe cos this is the first time im emailin u, its in the junk email or sumthin...do check out n reply..

Subramanian Ramachandran said...

i read this poem that day
i read this poem today

Why?
Cause i do not understand what it tries to say,

What?
I'm still trying to figure out

When?
Again...this noon

I read this poem that day
Again....today

Niranjan said...

If U R true Archana, I am Ur Niranjan, pl come & meet me, I am fond of U

Anonymous said...

Who is true Archana that we have to confirm from Railway Administration and from CBI department of India.